[評鑑]2008/12/8的Presentation

前幾天在化工系的Student Seminar，講完Presentaion後，在場的化工系學生會填一張evaluation form，給予講者意見(其實這個seminar對我們而言，很像修一門課，通常是需要出席的)。
問卷：實收60份(期末的人通常都比期中少)，約有1/4的人有額外給評論，挺好的。
評分方式(1-7)：1-2(需要改進, needs improvement)，3-4(平均, average)，5-6(好, good)，7(非常好, excellent)。
結果：組織(Organization): 5.32, 科技內容(Techinical Content): 5.53, 報告方式(Presentation Style): 4.92, 討論應對(Handing of Discussion): 5.38。
建議：1. Try to minimize occasions when you read the text of your slides to us, especially for long sentences.
2. The slides were a little crowded but otherwise very good.
3. Cover slide is boring. Relatively good delivery in comparison to other non-native english speakers. You need to be more animated with your talk and get the audience excited about what you are excited about. Always relate your work to the ultimate goal, i.e. the reason why the research is being conducted in the first place.
4. It was a nice talk.
5. Confusing to introduce new data after conclusions.
6. Very clear.
7. Too small and too many words in some slides.
8. Don't put too much on 1 slide, and when you put something on the slide, make sure people can read it. Nice work on the phase diagram and morphology.
9. It is poor presentation style to put complete sentences on slildes and you did this on your conclusions slide.
10. Good talk.
11. Some of the wording in the slides are very tiny; exp: Label on graphs. Hard to read. Try not to put full sentenses on the slides.
12. Very nice images of the fibers.
13. Organization, esp of introduction, needs to be improved.
14. You seemed nervous- relax!!
15. Text in figures not visible. Slides should be slightly less crowded.
總結一下就是：
1.投影片太擠太多東西(我的慣病，以後會改進的)。
2.不要放完整句子在投影片上並照著念(下次會努力把想講的東西背起來，而不是都放上去，因為怕太緊張忘光光，導致投影片太多字)。
3.一開始的介紹太無聊，沒有抓住人心(老實說，這點最重要，我一直很缺乏的就是對研究的熱情，所以自己要先有很大的熱情，才能傳達給別人)。
心得：化工系的學生很善良，評分很和善，好感人，因為看評鑑表前真的需要很大的勇氣，一個不小心可能就要經歷心靈重創重建。